Draft 2 of Music Video

This is my the completed draft of the first 1.44 seconds of my music video, however, there is shots which needed to be added within some spaces of the video. These shots will include my artist playing the piano to visualise the lyrical meaning of the song. I got several second opinions on the video and all comments were extemely postivite however, the comment on adding a piano scene sounded extremeley sucsessful with my class mates.